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ksywa812

Hi!
My name is Paul and I'm 17 years old. This is my track 'Ancient World' in Genre Tech-Trance.
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refxandtito1 · Posted: Mon 20:58, 16 Jan 2012 Post subject:

The intro was the best part of your track i didn't like the little bassline around 1:00 sounds very computerized, the square lead i would like to come reversed so the crowd knows what is coming,
also after the drop needs work its very simple, as your track sounds really good you need ti fix your drop and your breakdown a-bit more, so it sounds more fully professional maked.

Really like the part around 4, with the square playing there, maybe you could try finding a-bit more catchy melody?

But expect all that this track is really powerfull Smile

try to find your own style you don't need w&w.. they have their style get your own.